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SPN fic: He said Yes. Gen

Title:  He said Yes
Genre: Gen, Angst
Characters: Dean, Sam, Castiel
Rating: PG 13
Word Count: 674 (oops!)
Spoiler: Season 5, 5.03 and 5.04
Prompt: 'THE' voicemail
Summary: Written for taelynhawkerfor The Sam and Dean Drabble-a-thon (guys, go have fun there too!)
Disclaimer: Sadly, I do not own them..
A/N: I'm trying different method of writing, so please let me know what do you think! Thank you!

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After Lucifer left, Sam finally drew in breaths and he’s already perspiring like he had just finished a marathon.

Sam paced up and down the motel room while he stare at his cell and contemplated what should he do next, thumb hovering over the speed dial. On the cue when Sam was about to let his thumb press the speed dial, his cell went off startling him and his hand slipped, sending his cell clattering onto the floor while he just stare dumbly at it and debating whether should he pick it up or let it ring. He was spared the agony when the call went to voicemail, he finally pick up his cell, somehow he was nervously and like what he thought, the caller was Dean and he had left him a voicemail.

The thought of Dean’s voicemail left him chilled to the bone, the last voicemail Dean had left him was full of hurt and bitter anger, he had remembered every single word from it and just by thinking of it reminds him why was he doing in this motel room alone and afraid of what he has and will become.

But he really needs Dean to be his anchor, with all the painful withdrawal from craving demon’s blood and Lucifer’s invitation he’s at his wrist end, so he took his first step and dialed Dean’s number, however Dean was not answering, this spark a series of questions in his head about why Dean is not answering his call.

“Hello, Sam.” Sam turns around while chiding himself for not being on guard and to find himself greeted by Castiel, thankfully it’s something that Sam had gotten use to but he’s still feels awkward with Castiel around especially when he’s the one who jump start the apocalypse.

The angel look at him with something Sam wasn’t sure about, something akin to sadness with an edge to it; this edge is something new to Sam.

“Where’s Dean?” Sam asked, damn all the awkwardness, he feels a strong urgency to find Dean.

Castiel merely replied, “He said yes.” looking at Sam with piercing gaze and he realized the edge he saw was anger, for the first time it was not directed to him.

“Why?” Sam tires to control himself, he couldn’t believe what Castiel had told him, he just couldn’t unless is because… Sam stopped himself from thinking, he cannot dwell any further. What he wants to know is, why?

Castiel merely shook his head and look straight into Sam’s eyes and said with regret coating his tone, “He saw the future, he saw the end of it.”

Sam looked right through his words; it was screaming at him, he did it for you!

“Take me to him!” Sam’s brain going into an overdrive, the way Castiel told him seems unreal; it’s all nothing but a trick! There’s no way Dean would agree to be Michael’s vessel! “Please, Cas!”

“No.” Castiel said with a tone of finality, “I was sent here to protect you and to prevent you from seeing Dean.” Castiel lowered his gaze as he said, “There is nothing we can do now but to watch.”

Instead of debating with Castiel, Sam decided to try his luck and call Dean again; he pace around the room, ignoring Castiel while the angel stood rooted to the same spot, but still to no avail.

And hearing Dean’s voice when the call was directed to the voicemail reminded Sam the voicemail Dean had left him, Sam’s fingers immediately key in the numbers and waited while the voicemail is played, but there were only silence. Then he heard an intake of air like Dean is going to speak however the voicemail ended abruptly, Sam felt numb as he pushed the key to replay, again replay and replay but all he heard was the same thing.

Sam kept replaying the voicemail till his cell’s battery was flat he still tries, when he finally broke down Castiel took his cell away.

And Sam finally accepted that Dean was gone.


Thank you for reading!
 

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( 6 comments — Death Wish )
autumnverse
Nov. 8th, 2009 06:40 pm (UTC)
Oh boys *feels sad*

Very well done, but so sad *sniffles*
hollow_death
Nov. 9th, 2009 01:08 am (UTC)
You are the first again! XD *hugs*

Oh boys *feels sad*

Very well done, but so sad *sniffles*


*hands out kleenex* Yea, Oh boys! They need a hug!

I'm glad you feel sad, that was my evil plan! Muhaha XD
And thank you for reading and friending me! :D
b_o_w_a
Nov. 9th, 2009 02:13 am (UTC)
Teh angst! OMG, I think I'm gonna cry. Give me a moment....

Oh my goodness, that was beautiful. It was so simple, and yet so over powering, and gosh, I started to cry. I love fics like that. I can't really explain what kind of fic it is, but they're amazing. You used the words wonderfully, each word had a meaning, and was needed. And I love how you made Cas, I don't like Cas, so good job on that, but he was just...so human. *flails* And my poor Sammy! *huggles him* Guhhhhhhhh....Sam, he is too thick-headed for his own good sometimes, and I'm debating between wacking him in the head, or huggling him so more. *flail*
I'm gonna stop now, by telling you that you're amazing. :) Write more!
hollow_death
Nov. 9th, 2009 02:47 am (UTC)
Sure, hon! *hands out kleenex*

Oh my goodness, that was beautiful. It was so simple, and yet so over powering, and gosh, I started to cry. I love fics like that. I can't really explain what kind of fic it is, but they're amazing. You used the words wonderfully, each word had a meaning, and was needed.

*Blush* Thank you for such kind words! And I get what you mean, there's also times where I get this same feeling as yours! *hugs*

And I love how you made Cas, I don't like Cas, so good job on that, but he was just...so human.*flails*
Really? LOL *does victory dance* I'm all right with him, especially in season 5. Hmmm he's too human? Oops! I'm still tryin to learn to write him.. And I feel he have special feelings towards Dean cuz 1) Dean is his charge 2) Cas have learnt more about how to deal with people since he pull Dean out of the pit 3) He in fact loves humanity 4) Dean is his friend. So in ep like 4.16 "On the Head of a Pin", where Cas is more "human" so as to speak.

And my poor Sammy! *huggles him* Guhhhhhhhh....Sam, he is too thick-headed for his own good sometimes, and I'm debating between wacking him in the head, or huggling him so more. *flail*

Yup, he needs a hug! *joins in* I do agree he can be quite thick-headed for his own good, after all he's a Winchester too! *flails together* LOL

I'm gonna stop now, by telling you that you're amazing. :) Write more!
Once again thank you! XD *hugs*




b_o_w_a
Nov. 9th, 2009 03:02 am (UTC)
Ah, no, I didn't mean that you made Cas too human, because like you said, I get the feeling that he likes Dean, and to me, he always seems "cold", but now that Dean is gone, he's acting "human" because Dean is gone and he feels bad! And yeah, I like my run on sentences. :D
So, in fact, Cas is perfect in this story. lol
hollow_death
Nov. 9th, 2009 03:27 am (UTC)
Orh! Okay! My bad!*headdesk* XD
Yup, I agreed, I'm glad it work! XD
Thank you! XD
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